• Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone
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    6 months ago

    You should absolutely be pedantic about a paid, published article having writing like that. It’s not some random internet comment from someone who may or may not have graduated high school, this was approved by multiple people who allegedly went to college for the writing related jobs they have. It should at least pass the “does this make sense if you think about it at all for more than 5 seconds” test.

    And yeah I know reporters and writers facing the same overwork/underpay squeeze as everyone else. This is more about the corporations that run these papers and magazines being responsible for things deteriorating to this point.

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      6 months ago

      I think you could also read it as “was already [so old he was] older than her father.”

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        6 months ago

        That’s the same reading. That doesn’t change the meaning at all. Am I taking crazy pills?

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          It highlights the age gap between her and Trump by using her father’s age as a reference point. People are joking about how it sounds like they’re saying the age gap between her father and Trump has changed over time as if they age at different rates.

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            6 months ago

            Folks know that the author was trying to point out the age gap. But it was really poorly written, and they’re criticizing that writing.

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              I dunno, the person I replied to originally seems to be losing their mind over this even though it makes sense even if a bit clunky and if everyone knows what they’re trying to say then is it really that bad? Conveying meaning is the entire point of language and it seems to have done the job.