CantaloupeLifestyle@lemmy.world to politics @lemmy.worldEnglish · 1 year agoSecret Service agents protecting Biden’s granddaughter open fire when 3 people try to break into SUVapnews.comexternal-linkmessage-square187fedilinkarrow-up1596arrow-down136cross-posted to: usa@lemmy.ml
arrow-up1560arrow-down1external-linkSecret Service agents protecting Biden’s granddaughter open fire when 3 people try to break into SUVapnews.comCantaloupeLifestyle@lemmy.world to politics @lemmy.worldEnglish · 1 year agomessage-square187fedilinkcross-posted to: usa@lemmy.ml
minus-squareEl Barto@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up5arrow-down1·1 year agoHow would you have written it?
minus-squareNotMyOldRedditName@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up14arrow-down10·1 year agoNot OP Secret Service agents protecting Biden’s granddaughter open fire when 3 people pick the wrong SUV to streal.
minus-squareMaggoty@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up14arrow-down1·1 year agoSecret Service Fires Shots at Car Thieves But we don’t do non sensationalist headlines anymore.
minus-squareafraid_of_zombies@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up4arrow-down1·1 year agoThat implies that there was a right SUV to steal.
minus-squareEl Barto@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up10arrow-down7·1 year agoYou just made me realize that the original headline doesn’t specify that the SUV is where the granddaughter is. You also make that mistake. I think we can do better. Let’s see: Secret Service open fire at thieves who unknowingly attempted to break into SUV carrying Biden’s granddaughter. And I still think we can do better, but right now I’m le tired.
minus-squareBlaidd@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up10arrow-down1·edit-21 year agoThe vehicle was empty, it wasn’t carrying anyone.
How would you have written it?
Not OP
Secret Service agents protecting Biden’s granddaughter open fire when 3 people pick the wrong SUV to streal.
Secret Service Fires Shots at Car Thieves
But we don’t do non sensationalist headlines anymore.
That implies that there was a right SUV to steal.
You just made me realize that the original headline doesn’t specify that the SUV is where the granddaughter is. You also make that mistake.
I think we can do better. Let’s see:
Secret Service open fire at thieves who unknowingly attempted to break into SUV carrying Biden’s granddaughter.
And I still think we can do better, but right now I’m le tired.
The vehicle was empty, it wasn’t carrying anyone.